Once, ages ago, I was an amoeba,
A tiny thing, a protist of one cell.
I'd never known of physics or photons;
I'd never dreamt of heaven or hell.
Looking back, I was a machine,
Some organelles, some carbon chains,
Mindlessly evolving,
Evolving mindless gains.
Once, ages ago, I was a sponge,
A porifera filtering the sea.
I'd never known of chemistry;
I'd never dreamt of you or me.
Looking back, I was a machine,
Soaking up ocean, finding nutrition,
Flagellas and enzymes,
Not sentient cognition.
Once, ages ago, I was a fish,
A chordate of gills and fins.
I'd never known of poems or prose;
I'd never dreamt of mortal sins.
Looking back, I was a machine,
Only moving to stay alive.
I was the remainder, the only one left
When other fish couldn't survive.
Once, ages ago, I was a snake,
A reptile of fang-tipped maw.
I'd never known of systems or sums;
I'd never dreamt of sacred law.
Looking back, I was a machine,
A vessel for instincts and not for thought.
My only interest, outside myself
Became the prey I sought.
Once, ages ago, I was a mouse,
A mammal who stirred in nights.
I'd never known of galaxies;
I'd never dreamt of moral rights.
Looking back, I was a machine,
Keeping predators at bay.
Thought was a tool that helped me
To live another day.
Once, ages ago, I was a man.













Comments
(writing poetry is good but hardly work)
Yet its complex development through evolution evident
A religious hint too included with the mention of heaven & hell
The inclusion of a machine, cold & merely mechanical ~ interesting touch
A sponge ~ like a child soaking up knowledge regardless ~ learning
The use of fish, immediate draws the mind to the sea ~ nature
To swim ~ eat, breed on ~ survive, pure instinct no thoughts present
A hint of Adam & Eve a snake & respect for the law
Prey & predator too, life
To conclude machine & human thought instead of
A possible sex change !
· footnote – superb poetry
· some words, I would need to get out a dictionary
· would still struggle to understand the meaning of such clever usage of words
Amazing write
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-had to use a dictionary myself at points!
Honesty counts to the square heart of my eye counts
Quantum mechanics machinery
Perfect reply to commentry
Love for perfection & dictionary
Can’t live without it for I am dyslexic
You Rock
Don't need a blind fold for I can see
Every single beat of quality time reads poetry
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My beliefs on man might surprise you.
I am curious to see what other opinions arise as well.
Duality is something I always like to use in poems.
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You've created a beautiful dance of the scientific world and melody of poetry within this piece.
I love the fusion you have created.
Awesome and great work!
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Tell me...
What can the eyes see?
Now tell me, what do the eyes of thought see? Awaken them, open them, and see pass the veil that shrouds the mortal eye.
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