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In my perfect, flawless, selfish world,
Your eyes would fade to grey.
Your skin would luster slate by night
And bitumen by day.

In my perfect, flawless, selfish world,
You'd cease to smile or speak;
Your mouth would neither conjure words
Nor stretch from cheek to cheek.

In my perfect, flawless, selfish world,
Your limbs would freeze in place;
You'd stiffen straight, forget your feet,
Lie still in my embrace.

In my perfect, flawless, selfish world,
Your body would lie flat,
A cutout of your former self
And monochrome, at that.

In my perfect, flawless, selfish world,
Your heart and mind would grieve;
You'd cease to comfort, charm, or cheer,
. . . but at least you'd never leave.
©2009 ~Error732
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:icontrauermei:
This is really good. Kinda creepy, but nice rhyming and excellent flow. The idea is well done too.
:iconchattycat28:
this is disturbing and beautiful at the same time, I love it
:iconhakeberhut:
Your skin would luster slate by night
And bitumen by day.


Oooh, I just love that line. . .*shivers* It kindof reminds me of the preparations for a mummy's burial, perhaps the South American ones where they made a mask of obsidian?

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Orgy-porgy, Ford and fun,
Kiss the girls and make them One.
Boys at one with girls at peace;
Orgy-porgy gives release.
:iconlovelyloon:
Your signature elicited a surprised chuckle.

:P


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You.
Yes, you.
:iconerror732:
Embalming is a strange process, to me. If a buddy of mine died, I don't think I'd want much to do with his corpse. But I suppose that's culturally narrow-minded of me.

Thanks!
:iconerror732:
A good thing, I hope.

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