You say I'm a simple sort of insect.
Well, I suppose that that's all right.
I have simple wings and simple dreams,
And I only dream of flight.
You have those mosaics scribed on paper,
Razor-thin but as fragile as the air.
You dreamt you were an artist and
Inspired to put them there.
You say I'm a stupid kind of bug.
A lamp could distract me for hours.
Well, I'm awed by mundane miracles,
And I dream of mundane powers.
You have your migrations,
Streams of color flocking in the sky.
You dreamt you were a rainbow crossing
Through a dreamer's eye.
You say I'm just a moth,
Aspiring to nothing great.
I've only a few short days to live;
I've resigned my life to fate.
Well, I may never become a butterfly;
I don't pretend I can,
But at least I don't flutter away my time
Dreaming I'm a man.













Comments
I love the comparison to butterflies, seems so simple yet I never would have considered it myself. I think my favourite lines have to be:
"A lamp could distract me for hours.
Well, I'm awed by mundane miracles,
And I dream of mundane powers."
..they sum up the simplicity of the subject so well, yet, it also captures the intrigue of the creature.
Good choice of structure too; captures the element of flapping wings whilst the undefined syllable pattern captures the sporadic nature of the insect.
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Thanks a million!
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Love every single word.
Right down to my long lost sock!
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wishing well
coins desire
dreams ripple
I cannot really say
How far down your sock goes,
But that's okay.
I'm just a man dreaming I'm a butterfly...
A strong emotion and feel to this piece.
I see no flaws in this. *faves*
Great piece!
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What can the eyes see?
Now tell me, what do the eyes of thought see? Awaken them, open them, and see pass the veil that shrouds the mortal eye.
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